Ok I'm gonna take a guess at the subject lol, I have read through this soo many times. It gives alot of good images and is a great poem, but would I be right in saying theres been a murder of some kind maybe? I think i'm wrong lol, a couple of things threw me off espcially the 'full lips envelop purest white' I cant figure that. But yea, long comment, great poem. And actually I really like the use of colors in it, and the way its all been described.

Lol ok, To start, thanks for the comment nice to know people red/see what I do, secondly a murder would be very cool and reading it myself I can see what you mean but here goes with the actualy meaning lol.

Parted stems,
Broken limbs, (Open Legs)
A sea of red and pink,
As the same day sets (The fluids)
Dawning new for one. ( Allessa's eyes)

Heavy gasp,
All expelled in screams, (Heavy breathing from exertions)
And joy the tears sing,
As cascade the face,
They do. (Crying with joy)

Bloody hands shake,
As weak cries envelop she, (Allessa Cries)
Givens head in givers hand, (Allessa is held)
And blue pools see red sky anew. (Allessa's eyes again)

Full lips envelop purest white,
In an arrangement of ranks. (A smile)

Tears wiped aside,
They call her Allessa. (The mother and father decide on a name)

Can you guess it yet ?? lol

Don't feel bad you didnt get it, Hell I prefer the murder idea lol

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Colour is the biggest illusion in the universe.

Ah wow I get it now, it makes sense, and is also kinda graphic lol. But wow thats an amazing way to put something. And the last line closes it really well, Gonna be a fav man. good work.

thanks for the fav man , and I love the style (describing it so it isnt known) just like Ezra Pound.

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Colour is the biggest illusion in the universe.

Ooops! I think that I'm a bit late on commenting, I'm sorry.
I like it very much!! At first a was surprised because the name Allessa sounds very similar to my name in quenya (which is one of my nick names).

Thanks to God I read it a couple of times before looking the comments.

At fist I thought that it was a poem about sex but after reading it a couple of times but I finally catched it's meaning. I realised it when I read “they call her Allessa”, but I was suspicious since “dawning new for one”.

My favourite parts are:
“A sea of red and pink,
As the same day sets
Dawning new for one”

and “Full lips envelop purest white”.

It is very beautiful. Really.

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100% worried about her English grammar

HAHA cool you have an Elvish name, mine is Aerandir Nolatari whats yours?.

Thanks for the comment and I don't mind when people comment lol, I'm always happy for them, so thankies

All thanks, its cool that you got the subject but its just as much fun to see what people think of it without knowing.

My fav part would be

Bloody hands shake,
As weak cries envelop she,
Givens head in givers hand,
And blue pools see red sky anew.


But once again thanks I might write some more soon.

P.S. Yes I did edit the name there were 1 to many "l's" in the name.

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Colour is the biggest illusion in the universe.

Great poem is it about some person giving birth. Just a guess I could be wrong.

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Lots of Love, Miss A.

Everybody I can drawing great stick figure. Great at drawing a running man, probably can add some shoes....maybe not.

GOD DAMN your good girl spot on. thankiessss

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Colour is the biggest illusion in the universe.

Well thanks, I don't know I just kinda of got that feeling the poem was about somebody giving birth towards the end.

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Lots of Love, Miss A.

Everybody I can drawing great stick figure. Great at drawing a running man, probably can add some shoes....maybe not.